Long time before I ever see your face again
I know you love me
This is fine enough
I was never the protagonist to this but a companion
I can relate to this personally..
It's pretty hard these days to see poems one can relate to..
This one touched me...
Well-done @artwatch
You must be sad for the story ends around this climax
Insert comedic relief here
Awesome, haha. You've got quite a dry sense of humour in a lot of your pieces and it always gets me...
The stanza just afterward is wonderful too, the imagination fading, the wizard stepping back - great images which capture that sense of reversal through time.
Long time before I ever see your face again
I know you love me
This is fine enough
I was never the protagonist to this but a companion
I can relate to this personally..
It's pretty hard these days to see poems one can relate to..
This one touched me...
Well-done @artwatch
Awesome, haha. You've got quite a dry sense of humour in a lot of your pieces and it always gets me...
The stanza just afterward is wonderful too, the imagination fading, the wizard stepping back - great images which capture that sense of reversal through time.
I always value your thoughtfully poetic feedback!
Very nice poem & beautiful flower photo
cheers
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You always write nice poem...heart touching poetry