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RE: The Weekend Freewrite - 3/7/2020- Parts 1-2-3
Do you mean the middle hills? Well, you know what high heels are, right? Her's were just a little lower. )))
And hills and heels sound quite the same. )))
I should have caught that!...Alice donned her favourite pink dress and white mid-heel shoes, slung her purse over her shoulder and went out.......I was imagining Alice on the middle hills ...as opposed to the faraway hills....
Thank you! I corrected it.