All I can say about this one is OMG you knocked it out of the ball park. All I was missing was the popcorn. Your writing took me there inside of the story and I could feel and identify with your characters and the creepy things too although somewhat indifferent. Your beautiful talent is screaming loudly. I take a bow before you @marie-jay I will upvote this tomorrow when my steem is up.,,,,,RESTEEMING!!