You really got me there my friend. Your story took quite a turn, from serene and calm to super scary! Outstanding! It was like watching a movie in my head as I read! You are an excellent writer.
I feel bad as I missed wishing you a Happy Birthday, so I will remedy that now...
Haahaahaa @sgt-dan Love that!!! Thank you, and thank you and glad you like the story, unfortunately the way that things are set up here and basically everywhere there is not much in the way of profit for this unless you've been here pretty much mainly as a writer for three or four years.