Though it’s slightly difficult to work out the exact sequence of events here, your piece is so full of emotion it was likely difficult to write.
It’s the Wednesday prompt delivery team here with the moist challenge for today:
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-733-5-minute-freewrite-wednesday-prompt-damp-conditions
There is no excuse for writing poorly, but it was definitely cathartic.
I wouldn't say poor writing at all. I did read it several times, so it was interesting enough for me to try to work out what was happening, and you certainly managed to convey the depth of your emotion which can be very difficult to do.