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RE: "Psychic" a five minute freewrite

in #freewritehouse7 years ago

Great dialogue and great closing line! Reminds me in a way of that joke about the boy who never spoke, worrying his parents and baffling the doctors, until one morning at age 4 he slammed down his spoon and said this oatmeal is cold. Astonished, his parents asked why he'd never uttered a word before this. "Up til now, everything's been fine," he said.