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RE: "Ketchup" a weekend freewrite

That was certainly a varied set of prompts to weave into a story. You did a great job of continuing in seamlessly. I like how we find out the woman is your sister and it's obvious that you are caring for her. I also like how you are being humanitarian and helping out the homeless person. Plus he not just a homeless person, you actually know his name and have helped him before. Then you tug even further on our heartstrings by saying that the poor guys pet had died. A lot of emotion in a short time. Good job. And congratulations on the Curie!

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Thank you! Your thoughtful comments mean a lot. :)

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I'm just getting started here, so I thought it would be a good idea to learn from the top quality posts. I'm following Curie to see who they have awarded, and so far, I see why.