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RE: In the devil's cauldron - A Pop-Up WeWrite Contest!
You're right. In any case, habit and passive submission are strong, beyond the explosion and action.
Yeah, @owasco did well with that first part, leaving a good margin for different sequels.
I like how you displayed two passionate sides of her personality that were tearing her apart.
Yes, it seems to me that when a submissive person is abused, she suffers for two reasons, one for the perpetrator and one for her own recrimination in silencing what she wants to scream.