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RE: Mizu No Oto - Every Image Has Its Haiku Contest - WEEK #9
Statue set in stone
Immune to warmth and shadow.
Beyond life's passions
Statue set in stone
Immune to warmth and shadow.
Beyond life's passions
I like the representation of the strength of a bull present in your haiku. It is like looking at the image of a cave painting and feeling that energy reflected. Nice work.
Thank you! I'm not much of a haiku writer--it's a new adventure for me. I just listen to my heart and count syllables :)
Is there another way to do it? Ha, ha, ha.
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I love this.
In fact, it's what inspired my own. Although I'm not sure of the second line though. The shadow part. (I know the stone can't feel warmth)
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Thank you! I love yours.
The second line of mine: immune to the metaphoric shadows and warmth of life. I thought of that as I watched physical shadow and warm sun fall upon the statue.
Wow
That's interesting...
I didn't connect warmth and shadow at first
That's a good one
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The statue reflects almost the impassibility of the Zen disciple, a model to follow!