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RE: SEC S20W1 || Hematopoiesis - Module 1
Thank You for your worthy participation in our homework Assignment. We are glad to see your post. Happy learning! Let me assess your home work task 🙈
Observations/Evaluation/ Grading
| Requirements | Assignment have been met | Grading marks |
|---|---|---|
| Anatomy and function of hematopoietic organs | The student correctly detailed the anatomy and function of the hematopoietic organs, however he also tried to mention the anatomical location of the liver and spleen. She even mentioned Thymus is responsible. Good Job | 2/1.9 |
| Hematopoyesis Medular vs Hematopoyesis Extramedular | The student has describes the difference between both. But she couldn't mention that Extramedular only activated when there is a disease. | 2/1.7 |
| Make a Diagram & Explain | The student correctly make the hematopoiesis diagram, highlighting the action of the bone marrow in the production of lymphoid and myeloid lines when they are required (in case of lack of erythrocytes, lymphocytes or NK cells). | 2/1.9 |
| Answer Quiz | Answered all the quiz questions but only 8 questions were correct. | 1/0.8 |
| Clinical Case | she mentioned the femur fracture as the cause of the blood loss, however she also mention kidney problem and EPO.You explained very well how blood comparability is important factor when chosing a donor for a partner. I hope you liked participating and I hope the next module is much more valuable to you! | 3/2.9 |
Additional comments.
The questions are well written. Good job.In second question, student couldn't go in depth. In first question you let us know the anatomical location where each body part present. Stem cell as the progenitor of all cells. You tried your best to explain the diagram and you also explain it very well. You mentioned feumer rupture in clinical case and kidney problem. Even you also mention the EPO. You explained very well how blood comparability is important factor when chosing a donor for a partner. I hope you liked participating and I hope the next module is much more valuable to you!
Thanks for the feedback but I think you missed something In my question two.
I mentioned that: This is not the normal way of blood production so it happens in a pathological conditions. That highlights the point that it is only activated in disease state🙏🏽
It's my great pleasure. Let me inform you your 1st image is I stock image. Use only free source images, you can take from pexels, pixabyy etc. I enjoyed your home work assignment. Oh thank you, darling ,but I haven't missed anything. Actually, I mean that you could go in more depths. That's why I said that if you write it more and go in more details, then it would be more wonderful.
It will be appreciated if you mention the references where you consult first to wrote this assignment. You can mention references. You did a good job by answering these questions. Have a wonderful day ahead. I'm sure you'll also enjoy week 2 , module 2. Be ready 🙈.
Thank you for the clarification 🫂. I’m pumped up for module 2
Hola amiga @akuoli
@aaliarubab fue muy amable en calificarte, pero deberías considerar cambiar esa imagen (no tiene libres derechos de autor) por una portada bonita hecha en Canva o Picsart para que la publicación tenga mejor presentación, además debes tener cuidado con algunos párrafos que se encuentran pegados.
Por otro lado, tu cuenta se inicio hace 3 años pero estuvo todo este tiempo inactiva hasta hace 5 días... Eres libre de participar en las comunidades, pero los ganadores de los clases semanales deberían ser usuarios activos por lo menos en los últimos 3 meses.
@steemcurator01