Hi @jawadkhanniazi ,
if you are taking part in the diary game ,try to share a diary rather than a story
Try writing your post in Paragraphs
Use some markdowns to make a good presentation of your diary .
Remember to add your achievement 1 post link under your diary post.
i hope you understand , and try to improve the quality of your posts . for this you can take ideas by reading diary from any senior member.
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Thanks
Yours @rashid001
Country Representative
Pakistan
thank you sir i will be careful next time