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RE: Feelings of a neglected heart

in Dream Steem6 hours ago

A very deep and touching post… your words carry a clear sincerity and a heavy emotion that reaches the reader effortlessly. I really liked how you expressed silence not as comfort, but as an inner burden, and how you described the heart as something neglected despite all the sacrifices it has made.

There is a clear pain in your writing, yet at the same time, there is a beautiful glimmer of hope—especially toward the end, where you are still searching for a better time and place. This balance between pain and hope is what makes the piece feel so alive and relatable.

Sometimes, realizing that we have given more than we should is the true beginning of change, not the end. Perhaps what you are feeling now is the first step toward a more honest and fair life for yourself.

Keep writing… because this kind of expression is not weakness, but a quiet strength.

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Thank you friend, hopefully this is the beginning of a new spirit

I hope so too

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