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Great. I learned something new today, which is fantastic. I loved this "exquisite corpse" activity. We used to play it all the time in college—though not with narrative texts, but with poetry. Maybe we could try it that way.
To me it feels the storyline was gone. It is unclear to me how many people were present. It feels as if not everyone read all the earlier parts or the translators (most likely) messed it up.
@ladyaryastark managed to pull the writing together, and to my surprise, I loved the final version. Haven't you read it? In fact, I thought it was a perfectly rounded piece where the ending aligned with the...
I don't think you should step away. If there was one thing that defined the Surrealists, it was precisely chaos—and the act of "breaking the mold" that presents life as a mere sequence of actions, when in reality, it is a whirlwind. I hope you view it from this perspective, @wakeupkitty.
Dubby is a nice German Bot - he'll get 80% Beneficiaries from original Post and share them among the participants of the contest. Every contributor gets 14%... ;-))
Great. I learned something new today, which is fantastic. I loved this "exquisite corpse" activity. We used to play it all the time in college—though not with narrative texts, but with poetry. Maybe we could try it that way.
You can always write a poem.
To me it feels the storyline was gone. It is unclear to me how many people were present. It feels as if not everyone read all the earlier parts or the translators (most likely) messed it up.
@ladyaryastark managed to pull the writing together, and to my surprise, I loved the final version. Haven't you read it? In fact, I thought it was a perfectly rounded piece where the ending aligned with the...
I read it hours ago, but somehow Ingot lost at the piece @ronnie wrote. I do not understand who says what.
Well, the idea is to include digressions too—you know, like in Cortázar's Hopscotch.
It is not about that, but me not understanding who says what...
How come "they" say I am chaotic? I better stay away then..
I don't think you should step away. If there was one thing that defined the Surrealists, it was precisely chaos—and the act of "breaking the mold" that presents life as a mere sequence of actions, when in reality, it is a whirlwind. I hope you view it from this perspective, @wakeupkitty.