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RE: Blockchain Technology in the Healthcare Industry - Crypto Academy - S4W3 - Homework Post for @yohan2on
Hello @eugelys,
Thank you for participating in the 3rd Week Crypto Course in its 4th season and for your efforts to complete the suggested tasks, you deserve a 3.5/10 rating, according to the following scale:
| Originality | Compliance with topic | Consistency of method | Quality of analysis | Clarity of structure & language |
|---|---|---|---|---|
My review :
An article with under-average content, where you built most of your article on graphs without analyzing them in depth or following a clear methodology to explain their content, and therefore the article misses the editorial and critical dimension.
Thanks again for your effort, and we look forward to reading your next work.
Sincerely,@kouba01
Hi Professor @kouba01, thanks for your feedback. I think I felt pressured by the word limit of 600 to 1000 words, as I tend to get quite long in my explanations, so I opted for a mid-range of about 800 words. Then I tried to summarize and get straight to the point but, you have already explained, I didn't do it the right way. I wanted to say a lot more but I controlled myself because of the word count. I can see that I will let my writing flow for the next assignment.
For the next assignment I will have to follow my style of explaining in depth and not based on the amount of words requested.
See you in the next assignment!
Happy Sunday!
PS: I would like to know about what graphs do you refer? The images?