RE: Steemit Crypto Academy / Season 4 / Week 1 - Homework Post for @wahyunahrul – Socios.com - Blockchain Based Platform For Sports Industry
Hi @xtiansuper, Thanks for taking my class.
Based on the homework that you have made, here are the details of the assessment you get:
| Explanation of Socios.com Platform | 0.4/1 |
| Effects of Blockchain entering the sports industry | 0.4/1 |
| Personal opinion about Socios.com as an investment vehicle | 0.3/1 |
| Install and explore the Socios.com app | 0.5/2 |
| Fundamental analysis of a fan token | 1.2/2 |
| Conclusion | 1/1 |
| Follows Rules and Guidelines | 1/1 |
| Procedures and structure of writing | 0.5/1 |
| Total | 5.3/10 |
My Reviews and Suggestions:
You have completed the task.
Overall, your explanation is still very shallow. As in the answers to questions number 1, 2. and 3. The information you provide is still too general and very little. Try adding some additional information.
Even though you can't complete task number 4 completely, but you must still show the steps as far as you can.
Give more effort by putting new information on each task you make. The information you entered is too general.
Learn more about how to make good articles, your writing structure can still be improved.
Re-learn "Markdown Style Guide" to improve your writing skills.