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RE: Daniela's mental and emotional equilibrium
Your story is very touching. You have described the pain of a mother in very simple and beautiful words through which the reader can feel her pain. Especially Daniela's emotions and her pain are portrayed very well by you. I also liked that Carlos supported her through this difficult time and tried to make her happy. At the end, the sunlight, the shade of the trees and the hammock present a calm and hopeful scene. Your writing is simple yet very effective. Thanks for sharing such a beautiful and meaningful story. May Allah give you more success and good writing.
Heartfelt greetings to my dear little friend from My neighboring country!
There is no doubt that ever since I began inviting you to my posts, I have started to feel—quite on my own—that perhaps I have begun to write well.
People used to praise my writing in the past as well; however, the specific words you choose to commend my posts are, in themselves, worthy of praise.
And to tell you the truth, I have now become almost addicted to hearing these compliments—which is precisely why I muster the courage to invite you to every single one of my posts.
May Allah bless you.
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