The Suspense Hidden in the Old Mansion
Hello my friends,
This is my participation in the competition” Art and Writing Contest #171 Hosted by @solperez
In 1916, the newly married couple, Alessandro and Isabella, had been wanting to buy a large house for some time, but their financial situation didn't allow them to afford a mansion. Then, their agent showed them a very old house that had been closed up for years. Because it was inexpensive, Alessandro bought it immediately.
This old house had belonged to a family that had mysteriously disappeared decades earlier. It was said that some misfortune had befallen the owners, and before leaving, they had hidden their most valuable possessions somewhere within the walls of the house so that they wouldn't fall into the wrong hands.
They thought that when things improved, they would return to their home with their family and retrieve their treasure. But, as they say, things don't always go according to plan; what is meant to be, will be.
And then, a few years later, the entire family perished in a terrible accident. Their valuable possessions remained hidden somewhere in the house.
Today was Alessandro and Isabella's first day in the house. The parts of the house that had been closed for so long were being opened and cleaned. The plaster was crumbling in many places.
Suddenly, a piece of plaster fell from the ceiling of one of the rooms, and Isabella's eyes widened in surprise at what she saw peeking out from behind it. She wasn't just seeing something; she was confronting an untold truth hidden by time.
And then, trembling with fear, excitement, and suspense, Isabella frantically called her husband into the room.
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With lots of love and respect,
Sur-riti❤️

El destino jugó sus cartas para que la pareja de recién casados entrara a la asa donde los esperaba un imprevisto tesoro. La falta de dinero para adquirir una edificación en mejores condiciones fue la razón para que se transformara después la vida de ese matrimonio. Éxitos, amigo.
Hello friend,
First of all, thank you for visiting my post and leaving such a lovely comment. No one knows when fate will bring happiness or sorrow; it's unpredictable.
Best wishes.
Me encantó leerte. Gracias por estar. Un abrazo.
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Dear @solperez
As always, your appreciative words are my inspiration and motivate me to write even better in the future.
Thank you.
¡Holaaa amigo!🤗
Este relato es el clásico ejemplo reflexivo de que es mejor disfrutar lo que vamos teniendo, porque la vida es tan compleja que, a veces quienes menos se piensa, son los que disfrutan aquello que tanto trabajamos.
Te deseo mucho éxito en la dinámica... Un fuerte abrazo💚
Hola amigo,
Sin duda tienes razón, pero también es importante ahorrar para futuras preocupaciones y seguridad, y francamente, nadie sabe qué le depara el futuro.
Muchas gracias.
Siempre he pensado que nuestro destino está escrito por Dios, y la joven pareja tenía su destino un comienzo lleno de tropiezo y mala fortuna pero que en un futuro todo cambiaría para bien, siempre hay que tener fé en Dios no todo en la vida en malo siempre llegan cosas buenas a nuestra vida
Thanks for reading and commenting on my post , You are right ,