Thank you @yismar for your analysis, I like the way how you described the structure of my story. I think it is important to keep that in mind when writing stories and when someone would like to transmit the emotions and also to make reader to feel related to the feeling of heros.

Life is a wonderful gift that we receive only once and we should appreciate it and try to use everything the way that we do not regret later. Speak up, do not hold for us and just be ourselves. It is a real gift when people have relatives and families.

It was a pleasure to read your comment and thank you for visiting my post.