Hi @paopaoza

I'm really glad to hear that you were able to enjoy beautiful moments and wonderful days with your kind father and to know about your presentation. The content was really great. Especially the moments with your kind father and the times you spent together at the shopping mall were amazing. I hope your relationship always remains strong.

I posted your post for the first time a long time ago, but before giving any suggestions, I thought you seemed quite capable of writing posts. I’ll give a few small suggestions through which you can arrange your posts beautifully. So I’ve outlined them below.

• You should try to justify the text from the start to the end of the post. For example, you can use this markdown: <div class="text-justify"> Text </div>

• Another thing is to add small captions below your pictures.

• You can arrange your pictures using markdown. But try to make sure there are no edits. For example, if you’ve put pictures together, do it through markdown.

• You can give 'The Diary Game' as the title here. You can also use #thediarygame as a tag.

#s34improvement