I apologize @alfazmalek. There is a similarity of places and stories with this post : A Blessed Sunday Spent in Faith and Family: Urs Celebration of Hazrat Kasamshah and Sweet Moments with My Son, indirectly I understand this, because she is your wife.

Your writing is pretty good, but it doesn't fit the Steem Atlas guidelines. You can see the writing guidelines for Steem Atlas here: 15 Tips to Make Better Posts for Steem Atlas

I appreciate your participation and effort, you can try again on another occasion, and follow the writing guidelines that I have shared.