Club100|| Steemit Engagement Challenge (week 2): Create your original story || 15 percent to Colombia original ||Cafe Terrace at night by @bright6126

in Colombia-Original2 years ago (edited)

Cafe Terrace at night by @bright6126

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Hello dear Steemians all over the world and particularly @colombiaoriginal Community members. Today I have decided to drop my own story in the ongoing steemit engagement Contest and I'm going to be dropping a fictional story so I believe you would want to enjoy every ounce and moment of the story. Do comment and vote after reading in other to make this post engaged and interactive.


Cafe Terrace at night

SYNOPSIS

This story spans accross the drama which took place in a cafe when a guy in love with his girlfriend received an unexpected kiss from his long time crush.

Xavi has been in love with Rina over a long time now as much as time can tell. He can argue all day long that Rina is the most beautiful lady ever in the world, everyone around Xavi were always surprised why a guy could love a lady to this extent, it was more than Romeo and Juliet, although Xavi is the one who loved Rina the most.


If Xavi had known what would happen on this Night, he wouldn't have gone to his usual spot at night, (the terrace cafe). Well Rina works at Terrace cafe which has made Xavi to always be there almost every night but this particular night later became an unforgettable night for Xavi when the unexpected happened.


Lia is very beautiful girl who always admires Xavi, infact she is more endowed than Rina which everyone know but Xavi still prefers Rina anyways. On this Night was Lia's birthday and she was with her friends Celebrating it in Terrace cafe (same place Rina works, and Xavi happens to be there that night). So in the course of celebrating Lia's birthday, something mysterious happened. Well let's see 😊


Lia's friend were playing a Truth of Dare game so one of her friend dared her to kiss Xavi (who was sitting not too far from them). Wow!!! This was a huge opportunity for her, an opportunity she had been waiting all her life for. Earlier on today she had painted her lips pink, made her hair beautiful and wore a very beautiful gown to the cafe. Ok she stood up and went straight to where Xavi was sitting. Xavi had no idea what was happening at all and if he had, he would have left the cafe to prevent the drama from happening.


Lia smiled at Xavi then approached him closely then sent a very deep kiss to Xavi even before Xavi could see anything more on her pink lips. It would have been a good timing and moment for Lia except Rina just saw the kissing activities that just took place under her nose 😔. Xavi didn't expect the kiss but still wasn't fast enough to avoid it, the kiss was natural, it was emotional, it was beautiful and Lia delivered it with a very high sense of emotional, it was a heart sent kiss, a long time one time dream come true for her. While on the other side it was the last time Rina was going to love Xavi.


Rina saw the kissing activities, she was extremely surprised and was in a state of shock. She couldn't believe her eyes... How could Xavi do this? So many things crossed her for the first 10 mins. And why Xavi was trying to get over the kissing fantasies, he received a message from Rina. The message that shattered his heart and soul.

Like I said earlier on, if he had Known, he wouldn't have come to the cafe that night.

Pls I want to know the content of the message in the comment box😊

What do you think Rina sent to Xavi after seeing the kissing activities?

Thanks for reading my entry
I call on @starrchris and @solar-star to participate in this Contest too.

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 2 years ago 

Hello dear friend, welcome, a very nice story, full of love and romance, I congratulate you for your entry, it was very nice. Greetings and much success in the contest.

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Thanks for your review and contributions! I appreciate

Thankyou so much

Phewww what a story!
I applaud your creativity. I am a story writer and I can say that this story is a brilliant one.

The plot is well align and you delivered.
You also engaged your reader as well. That is brilliant, mehn you spiced it with suspense.
Absolutely great!

What do you think Rina sent to Xavi after seeing the kissing activities?

I would have guessed something like

“You are just like every other guy out there. Scum! It's over!”

But you didn't tell us if they were dating, you just portrayed to us that Xavi loved Rina and stalks her a lot. 🤔
Maybe her Texting him speaks volume so maybe they're dating or not.

Who knows.

Yea! Thanks for reading! I really want the audience to be on suspense and also logically ponder on the the story 😊

Oohhh yeah

I did ponder a lot too haha

I think the content of the message will be like 'You don fuck Up'😅

Xavi will be like who never fuck up hands in the air 😂

This is a really beautiful story Rina will be mad the only thing is to explain what happened but that will be difficult for her to believe.

🤣🤣🤣 your comment is really hilarious 😂 things go rogue here 🤣

I swear e go rogue no be small

“The voice of a man should be heard even when we know he might be lying. You have only tonight to explain yourself. If not, forget about us

But yiur creativity is too much.

Thanks so much 😊, I really appreciate

This story spans accross the drama which took place in a cafe when a guy in love with his girlfriend received an unexpected kiss from his long time crush.

This caught my interest ,I was visualizing the story as we do see in the movies,this love that is more than Romeo and Juliet Must be really strong ,the message that shattered his heart and touching,xavi should be able to overcome it and move on with lia since he enjoyed the kiss😂

I think Rina sent him !you are a scum and I’m even angry with my self for loving you and rina go know say en don fuck up

Your story is an original work and I must say you did well,I wish you success 😎🥺

I'm honored! Its my pleasure to get such a great review from you 🙏

Your are a creative writer and I appreciate the piece of art


We stopped by to tell you that we have come to vote for your publication.🙂

Thanks so much 🙏

 2 years ago 

I think Rina wrote to him: I believed in you and you let me down, now you've lost me, my heart just stopped loving you and there's no turning back, greetings good story!!

Wow! I love your suggestion 😍 thanks so much

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