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RE: Concurso semanal de escritura de cuentos 3 | Continuación de la historia
Hello @adriancabrera,
I was intrigued from the beginning while reading the story. Night, rain and the blue box that was suddenly found—this part created the mood of the story quite well. You have portrayed past mistakes and regrets very simply through the pictures.
I liked the cafe scene the most. There is no extra drama, but a lot is said in silence. The ending was hopeful, which ended the whole story beautifully. There is a good message here.
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| article presentation | very good ✅ |
| Story originality | looks original ✅ |
| Plagiarism free | ✅ |
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| Entry status | valid ✅ |
| Overall score | 9.5/10 |
Good luck for the contest.....