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RE: Weekly Story Writing Competition 3 | Story Continuation
Hello @samima1,
The story gradually builds up a tension, which you managed to maintain until the end. The parts of the blue box, the clock and the recorder are very naturally blended into the story. I had to stop while reading the part of Safin's voice, because the guilt and fear are clearly understood there.
Rimon's decision at the end made the story meaningful. It is not just a story of fear or mystery, but also about the inner struggle. Overall, the story is written in simple language, but the impact is deep. You did a good job.
| verification | & feedback |
|---|---|
| article presentation: | good ✅ |
| Story originality: | seems original ✅ |
| Plagiarism free: | ✅ |
| Steemexclusive: | ✅ |
| Contest rules followed: | ✅ |
| Entry status: | valid ✅ |
| Score: | 9.4/10 |
Best wishes for the contest