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RE: Concurso semanal de escritura de cuentos 3 | Continuación de la historia
Hello @josevas217,
The story was tense from the beginning. The blue box and the word “tic tac” make you understand that something terrible is waiting ahead. Rimon's description of the work connected the story well with reality, making the character seem more believable.
The ending was very sudden and powerful. The story was ended without giving any chance, which is perfect for this version. It clearly shows how terrible the consequences of wrong decisions can be. It was a good continuation.
| Verification | & Feedback |
|---|---|
| Article presentation: | good ✅ |
| Story originality: | looks original ✅ |
| Plagiarism free: | ✅ |
| Steemexclusive: | ✅ |
| Contest rules followed: | ✅ |
| Entry status: | valid ✅ |
| Score: | 9.3/10 |
Good luck for the contest