PowerHouseCreatives Contest- Waking up from the confusion

in ART LOVERS5 years ago (edited)

This is a new contest of #Powerhousecreatives by @steemitbloggers proposed by @zord189. It offers several sentences to choose one. And... ready to write. The contest guidelines are at PowerHouseCreatives Contest | Ready, Set, Write (Contest Details

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Waking up from the confusion.

Sandra and Melissa were resting quietly in the park under a lush tree. It was common for them to do this after jogging for half an hour. They were a bit overweight. Evergreen Park was in a coastal town. The fresh breeze filled their lungs with healthy air, pure air.

Suddenly, the girls were frozen, static, with no action to move; watching the townspeople running desperately. Everyone stepped aside. Shouting: run, run! They were dazed, they didn't know why, but they joined the commotion.

Everyone was running, overwhelmed, trying to save their lives: children, young people, men and women. Many were left behind, but no one cared about anyone.

Some fell and were run over by the terrible crowd. There were already many injured, among humans and pets. Sandra and Melissa ran together holding hands so as not to get lost, as they were childhood friends almost like sisters and loved each other very much. They felt wings on their feet.

They all ran to the top of a mountain, but none of them knew if they had time to get there. They couldn't turn around to look because every microsecond of life disappeared.

Suddenly, the sky lit up red, rising from the impressive clouds, white birds rushing over the crowd, even the animals. Surprised, the race became more desperate; however, the birds caught up with them and carried them in their claws to the top of the mountain.

Once released, in deep sorrow, they saw an immeasurable wave devour the structures of the city, which they had inhabited for so long. The agonizing situation left them with a bad taste, of misfortune.

They could not imagine, how they would start a new cycle of their lives. Rising from the ruins, it would not be easy. The uncertainty illuminated their faces but they were comforted by the miracle that moments before, had lived and what saved their lives. To begin would be a new experience.

I awoke this morning, sweat pouring down my brow and an uncontrollable crying that drowned me. I wished I had never had that dream. I woke up like a madman to call Sandra on the phone; in order to tell you the terrible misfortune experienced in that nightmare.

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Ready, Set, Write

This is our new contest for this week,.
This is a 'creative writing contest' called Ready, Set, Write. What does this mean? This means that you will be given 6 sentences and you have to pick 1 sentence to start off your story. We wanted to see how people's minds and different perspective comes into play on this. How each author expanded from just the sentence.

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I appreciate your reading. Thank you

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muy buena historia, tengo ganas de escribir pero aun no me vienen las ideas. espero poder entrar a tiempo.

Hola amiga. Hay varias opciones, solo escoge una. Puedes colocarla al principio o al final.

Me dejé atrapar por el suspenso, creo que corría también por esa montaña, gracias a Dios fue una pesadilla. Buen relato, descrito a la perfección. Éxitos comay, felicitaciones.

Qué risa! Yo también corría y no encontraba cómo terminar esa carrera. Gracias Comay

Excelente amiga.
Esta es una historia genial.
El saber que fue un sueño me saco del miedo.
Se que esta escena ha sido muy real en muchas partes.
"Que tu adelantamiento sea manifiesto a todos."
Es un texto bíblico que expresa mis deseos en tu carrera de escritora.
Un abrazo.

Me dejaste sin palabras amiga, gracias por tu lindo deseo. Dios derrame en ti y tu familia muchas bendiciones.

Really, a strong nightmare.
Good story

Ja,ja,ja...Si mi amiga. Realmente he tenido sueños asi con ese tipo de tragedias pero sin el milagro de los pájaros ja,ja

Amiga me gusto tu relato gracias a que fue un sueño. Que susto.
Suerte en el concurso.
Un abrazo

Gracias hermanita. Besos.

Fantastic story. I didn’t realize it was a dream until the end.

Ha-ha-ha... Well, that was the idea. Thank you for visiting. I'm glad you liked it.

What a horrible dream! Did you actually have a dream like this, or did you "dream" it up? ;)

Well done my friend!

Part of the story has been a recurring dream. Thank you.


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