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RE: SLC S27 Week3 - Let's Play OpenTTD:Ships

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1I see the ship is sailing nicely between the two docks 😊 But along with the detailed (close-up) image, it would also be good to show the general view — that is, both stations in one picture. And also the station windows, so that the number of passengers can be seen.1.9/2
2The oil refinery should have been placed not on the coast but further inland. And since you chose this refinery, I would have made the transit dock somewhere in the middle — at least farther from the refinery. But the task was to demonstrate a transfer, so that’s fine. However, in your tasks you wrote unload instead of transfer — please indicate “transfer” in the future.3.8/4
3That funny zigzag was just a joke meant for one participant — and almost everyone made that zigzag except him 😄 It wasn’t necessary to make such a long zigzag — just a few segments would have been enough.2/2
4Yes, there’s clearly a lot of oil accumulating — you need a lot more vehicles. Maybe even add a couple more freight stations nearby. In the station windows, I see a station overcrowded with passengers — you should add more transport there. I also see that you’re filtering the transport window (passengers, coal, oil).2/2
Total9.7/10

Thank you for joining in — you’re doing great! There’s still a lot of new content waiting in the game....

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 2 months ago 

Thanks for your review. I tried my best. And also, now I love the game.

Personally, I consider this game one for mathematicians and programmers — so anyone who plays it, I see as a smart person

 2 months ago 

I'm not soo good as a programmer but the game is now more interesting for me. In every week I wait for your lesson.

I think you will make more smart programmers and trained persons to run a travel agency. Believe me I have learnt many things for running a travel agency.