I love the fact that you're on this project, willing to help people out there know food choices. This would be very beneficial even though the cost of living is hard. I love your post but I you'll need to work on three things next time.

• Your diary game should be a summary of your day and the title matters. Your title sounds like a formal posts and not a diary game title. You can tell us what you did in summary as the title to attract readers.

• Your first picture doesn't really have to be a picture of you. Maybe you can use that of the Assembly hall to create first impression even though it comes later in the post.

• Lastly, your diary game should be less informative and more of narration as that's what diary game entry implies.

I wish you all the best in your steemit journey as you keep improving your style of writing. You can check out the #steem-atlas project if you don't mind. By using the map to describe a particular location, you can earn votes if your post is quality enough.