I’ve watched the film. The story itself is actually quite good; I can well imagine the older lady’s irritation. A song like that, which is never played to the end, drives you mad.

I’m not entirely sure what exactly you’re asking, but this is what struck me. The dubbing isn’t in sync with the characters’ mouths, and I personally find that distracting. I have to try very hard to ignore it. The narrator also speaks too quickly, so it doesn’t match the visuals. Perhaps having all the dialogue start a few beats later might solve this problem.

Incidentally, I don’t think the voices really suit the characters either.

Perhaps @bambuka can help you further?

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