Steemit Engagement Challenge Week # 3 || Defend The Statements || 20% beneficiary set to pak-charity.

in STEEMIT PAKISTAN2 years ago


Hello everyone!

With the engagement challenges going on there are a number of interesting contests held by every community and one of my favorite contest is the one held by my favorite community @steemit-pak. The topic is quite interesting and creative and the points I'm going to defend are :
  • Punishment never has a good effect.

  • Money is more important than love.

  • Votes are not guaranteed

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PUNISHMENT NEVER HAS A GOOD EFFECT

I truly believe that punishment never has a good effect on any person because it addresses the current behavior rather than the future one. The kids when repeatedly punished become frustrated and start having behavioral issues. It affects the confidence and self esteem of the person being punished.

The parents who punish their kids frequently are unable to establish a strong bonding with their kids. Punishment doesn't do any good because the person avoids doing mistake infront of the punisher but repeats the bad behavior when there's no one to supervise him.

I am absolutely against punishment because it negatively influences the personality of the person being punished. The parents should always avoid using traditional punishment method with their kids because it does more harm than good.

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MONEY IS MORE IMPORTANT THAN LOVE

I agree that money is more important than love because it provides social security and happiness but it shouldn't be the sole objective of any relationship. When it comes to long term relationship then money plays a very important role because it's very important for our partner to be financially independent.

No matter how much we love our better half, if the other person isn't financially stable and is unable to provide us the social security and the basic comforts of life than no matter how much love exists between the couple, it eventually fades. So money does play a very important role and is sometimes more important than love.

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VOTES ARE NOT GUARANTEED

One thing that I have learned about this platform, Steemit is that the votes from the curators here aren't guaranteed. One of the positive things about it is that when the votes aren't guaranteed then every single person tries to put in their maximum effort for SC01 and SC02's attention. In this way everyone tries to produce the quality content which is plagiarism free and has creativity as well.

So there's a healthy competition going on among all the people here to produce a quality content because the votes are not guaranteed but there's a chance of getting them if the content is creative, well presented and free of plagiarism.


I hope I've defended the three chosen points precisely and clearly. With this I'll end my post here. Best of luck to all the participants for the contest.

Regards,
Pixie.dust
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 2 years ago 

Thank you for taking part in the challenge. You have defended all three statements with valid points.

Don't forget to interact with other contest participants by commenting and upvoting their posts.

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 2 years ago 

You have Defened your all statements with logics. I strongly agree with your statements. Steemit is decentralized that's why votes are not guarranted. Best of luck for the contest :)

 2 years ago 

The parents who punish their kids frequently are unable to establish a strong bonding with their kids

I agree with you and I have experienced this in my life. Punishment is not the only solution every time, many times it is enough to explain with love.

No matter how much we love our better half, if the other person isn't financially stable and is unable to provide us the social security and the basic comforts of life than no matter how much love exists between the couple,

You're right here my friend you can't fill your tummy with love. It is said that giving and receiving gifts increases love but you also need money for that.

Very well defended statements.

Best wishes

Excelente participación compañera. Estoy de acuerdo totalmente como defendiste las declaraciones, como siempre digo una persona pone todo su esfuerzo para ganar dinero para darle bienestar a su familia y eso es amor.
En cuanto a que los votos no están garantizados creo que es una forma para dar lo mejor para ser vistos por los curadores principales.
Te deseo exito en este concurso ya que lo hiciste muy bien

Saludos y bendiciones

 2 years ago 

Thank you so much for your kind words and appreciation. It really means a lot.

 2 years ago 

It is 100% right that

When it comes to long term relationship then money plays a very important role because it's very important for our partner to be financially independent.
Because we can't see the ones we love longing for anything

 2 years ago 

You explained well these statements but I don't agree with point two completely money is important for our survival we can't ignore its importance but love is necessary too for real happiness and inner peace.
Best of luck for the contest

 2 years ago (edited)

Yes that's exactly what I've mentioned that money is necessary for our security and survival but at the same time it shouldn't be the sole objective of our life.

Thank you for reading my post.❤️

 2 years ago 

You have well explained all the points and Yes I totally agree that Punishment has never good impact. And Steemit is platform for everyone we should be patience and steady.

Well you're right punishment has never good impact on childrens. I also agree with you that money is better than love.

Good luck for the contest

Nice post, I really like what you said about this statement *"punishment never has a good effect"

But you didn't try to profer any solution or give any suggestion of what should be done if a child does something bad?.
So my question. what should be done if a child does something bad ??

And your statement here

The parents should always avoid using traditional punishment method with their kids because it does more harm than good.

Can you explain it further, because whether you use traditional method or not, aren't they all still punishments??

Thanks for sharing

 2 years ago 

Hi dear,
I am agreed with your statement punishment never had a good effect specially in kids ,if we treat them politicly we will got better results ,and about votes support from sc01, 02 you explained well 👍👍
Wish you for success 🤞🤞

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