Hello hammadsher looks like you have made impressive diary but there are certain things which you can include to make your post quality wise perfect.

• As it's a Diary game so you could add tags betterlife thediarygame.

• You can add w3w,plus ( its a kind of Location tracking system ) if you are using android its simple pin a point or location swap up from the bottom
  
  Touch and hold this to copy plus code
  

• You forgot to add Country tag which is very important as we CR's , Greeters and Other helpers find your posts through country Tag to upvote relevant country post.

• seems like you already have learned about applying markdown styles so i believe you are already Achievement 1 verified so at the end of post add it ( it would be helpful for people to learn more about you. )

I hope you will find it helpful let me know if you face any issues.