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RE: "Steemit Challenge s28wk6: Unexpected Chat's True Twist

in Steem4Nigeria22 days ago

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Week-6 : Unexpected Chat's True Twist

 
Hello @, thank you so much for taking part in Steemit Challenge Season 28 Week-6. I truly appreciate the time and creativity you put into your entry. Your assessment, including feedback and scores based on my evaluation criteria is provided below:

CriteriaMarksRemarks
Story start to finish4.8/5Okay
Originality & Uniqueness2.8/3-
Presentation0.9/1Okay
My observation0.9/1Okay
Total9.4/10
FeedbackYour story has a nice theme and goes well but you haven't kept your facts right for instance you started with "Friday morning dawned, to "during dinner" but they ordered pasta earlier this context implies evening bistro vibe." Or did they spend all their Friday there, but they were supposed to meet on weekend, no? Be more careful to score better.
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Thanks so much.
it's would have been more detailed but the word count would have exceeded the speculated .