I really enjoyed reading your writing. The style is simple, clear, and feels heartfelt. I especially found it very impressive that you gave more importance to your parents' time, training, and guidance than wealth. In today's era, most people consider only money as success. but you prioritized family values which is commendable. Describing your parents' hard work and strict training in a positive way shows your understanding. Being proud of your family and being grateful is a great blessing. Excellent and sincere writing, very good. 💙