I miss you with crazy thoughts
I miss you with crazy thoughts
from that first time when I saw you,
I've wanted you for a long time,
to have you always here in my present.
My body wants you too much,
like the forces of the waves bursting,
and I just miss with malice aforethought
the sweet shape of your lips to kiss.
I feel unprotected without you,
of those arms that bind me,
lead me into the total oblivion of the world,
as if there were no path at all.
Those eyes staring at my body,
who want me like I want you,
hypnotizing any movement,
even though you want to escape, I don't.
A little distance separates us,
but oblivion becomes a big stain,
in this burning heart of mine,
as the sighing skin becomes cold.
I saw you behind the mirror,
imagining that I still exist,
between your thinking and your wishing,
on your lips and eternal walk.
I love you pronounce your lips,
something that makes me totally sigh,
I wish you say my thoughts,
and I just want to be on your skin.
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This poem is such a splendid depiction of profound vulnerability. This lover of yours undoubtably imprinted their soul onto yours, leaving you scarred yet healed, broken yet at one with your current predicament. The back and forth changing of themes - speaking on how you miss the physical body of the person, followed by a deep longing for unity with what seems to be the a personification of imperishable love - truly translates your missing and details the suffering. Well done!
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Thanks for sharing,
Luka.
It's amazing what you say, I like the fact that you felt all this, because as you say it, I wanted this poetry to be felt.
Thank you very much, and of course, I'm going to visit your blog.
You managed to do so wonderfully!
Thank you very much!