Poetry contest by @dobartim II entry by @sadiaanyat

in Steem Schools • 4 years ago

Free Your Soul

Let’s go On the top of mountain
To see the world from so high

Let’s take a deep breath there
Let’s forget our worries for a while

you may look normal but deep down
Your heart is shivering, water is in your eye

Do you see the freedom of fish
I want to go deep to see the sea from inside

Stop passing the complements on others
Why you so black, so you so shy

If nothing is left for you in this world
Imagine the divine, have a peaceful flight

Don't take much burden of world' worries
Free your soul for a while

Be silent and let them to rule you because
At the end of the day, we all will die

#steemit #steemcontest #poetry #poetrygame #steemschools
4 years ago in Steem Schools by
$0.00
    1 vote
    Reply 2
    Sort:  
  • Trending
    • [-]
     4 years ago 

    Let’s take a deep breath there
    Let’s forget our worries for a while

    I do this most evenings when I go for a walk. There is this peace that nature's serenity offers. I bet you have experienced the same @sadiaanyat, for your poem reveals emotions, as you really wrote them from your heart.

    $0.00
      Reply
      [-]
       4 years ago 

      I love poetry. I think more you deeper you will write, more effective it will be

      $0.00
        Reply