Weekly Contest Week 10 - Poetry Game - Day 2 II by @sadiaanyat

in Steem Schools4 years ago

A silent Garden

I went to a garden one evening
I saw there some departing marks
The sun was setting the moon was rising
The stars were terrifying as it was getting dark and dark

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I felt a strange silence there
As someone has cried a lot here
A person who has broken and don't have dare
To live in his own sea like a shark

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It seems like a resurrection has passed
Someone's life has doomed so fast
Like someone met their beloved for last
And now it's time to say" good bye"
as it was getting dark and dark

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When I moved a little further, I came across a flower
It was soaked with tears as if it took a shower
When it found me staring him with deep thoughts
It hides its eye for a lark

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I went to it and asked the reason of this sadness
It told me that a man of gladness seldom fell into madness
But what is in your destiny other than badness
When the evil curse of the world falls on them, they depart
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It told that since then this garden is considered as departing mark
Since then the loneliness bark
It asked me to go back to the colorful world
As the garden is getting more dark and dark

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Amazing.. How did you come up with that? You just sounded like a "modern Edgar Alan Poe". Have you heard of him, @sadiaanyat? Check out his poem titled "Raven", you will love it.

Thank you so much sir but plz don't compare my little work with the great and well known work "Raven"
I love the raven...i already love it so much