5 Minute Freewrite: Tuesday - Prompt: what gift do you give to the person who has everything?
I felt the sun from below my eye lids.
I slowly raise my hands to block the rays as I blink and open my eyes.
The sun rays where over-pouring through the window screen and dancing on my face.
I stretch my toes and shift around the place. While doing so I refresh my memory about who I am and what I am doing today. I suddenly remember the date and have same bursts of excitement as today is the day I have been waiting for.
I turn around slowly to look at the beautiful face that is still asleep next to me.
A small nose, full lips and square jawline.
Hair all over the place and all the other amazing features.
I started at the piece of art until it started moving and opened its eyes.
Blessed with that drop dead gorgeous smile I felt like I was in Heaven.
“Happy Birthday Love”, I whisper as I bury my face under his.
He smiled again and held me close.
“So what do you want for your birthday?”, I asked. I had been planning for this day since the same day of last year, yet I ask him this again.
He pulled away from me and looked in my eyes and asked “What Gift do you give to a person who has everything ???”.
Again I fell in Love with the man I already am so much in Love with.
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This is my entry for the 5 Minute Freewrite Prompt : What gift do you give to a person who has everything by @freewritehouse @mariannewest.
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Good love story. I like the use of the prompt. These two lines stood out:
We can all relate to the sun being on our face with our eyes closed, but I've never heard it described this way.
The second one creates a wonderful space for the reader to fill in the details, and expresses the feeling of attraction. It's nicely balanced with the specific details you provide.
Nice job.
Thank you so much for your kind words and your time to read my Freewrite.
I am glad your were able to connect with the feelings I have tried to express.
Have a great day ahead.