My Entry for Writing Contest Week 100: Alarm

in Freewriters5 years ago

So I tried this once a long while ago, and I misread and did 240 words instead, whoops. So today I paid attention. My story accidentally ended up rhyming at the beginning on accident, so I stuck with it. I hope it still counts? If it does not oh-well I went with what felt right in the moment.

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Field of daffodils,
Spring lingering,
Comfort, my body feels.
What is this stinging?
Panic,
Heavy breathing,
Pulse, manic,
Alarm, Blaring,
Trapped in glass,
What's this feeling,
Confusing begins to pass,
Mind no longer reeling,
Cryostasis disengaged.

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Of course it's fine
to zapfic in rhyme!

:)