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RE: Locked game- A freewrite

in Freewriters6 years ago

I enjoyed this sentence a lot: They smelled that I was a poor, frightened devil and stole what I was carrying, the phone and the car.
I agree with Martha75 about the elegance of the couplen in your post.

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Thank you for your kind comment, @gemamedina.