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RE: The night before Christmas at the Platform Nine and Three-Quarters
I thought it was a Harry Potter start but you changed that fast and I am glad you did. The story reads like a train and it makes the perfect tale for Christmas Eve. Does the Polar Express still picks up kids?
BTW those fat Santas sound as if they are pedophiles and don't know about those parents who sent their kids away with a figure like that.
The snowball fight? I am fine if you delete it. It's better without.
Thanks for the writing with us and sharing this awesome story.
I never actually watched The Polar Express, or at least I didn’t finish it. It just popped into my head when I saw the picture, and I thought, why not switch things up and have them pick up naughty kids this time? 😅
And LOL with the pedophile angle... definitely wasn’t my intention! I get why it might seem that way, though. As for the snowball fight, I was a bit hesitant about including it, but honestly, I ran out of ideas for how to wrap it up.