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RE: Virus - A 5 Minute Freewrite
Wonderful!
First I was going to tell you that I read and I was not satisfied because I got lost in reading. Characters appeared at the end that did not help the story but entangled it.
However, the last explanatory paragraphs made my opinion change. That's why I tell you that the story seems wonderful to me. It has been a great pleasure to have read you @worldbuilder
Sorry, that was a little tricky of me and I can see how that would be confusing. I wasn't quite sure how to make it clear he was talking about a deity, but wanted to include this odd pairing of gods I've been thinking about.
After the image everything was clarified. The story without that explanation is not understood.