One Of Those Days, a Freewrite
The kettle was singing, the doorbell was ringing, the milk was boiling over, the record was skipping, the gutters were overflowing, the timer on the stove was dinging, the dog was barking, and she was pissed because the spoon I had just handed her was
"TOO BIG!!!"
for her mouth.
Just another moment in the life of a mother.
Soccer practice was to start in twenty minutes. We would be late for that. She wouldn't be any happier about being late than she was about the size of the spoon.
I quickly turned my back to her, trying to suppress a giggle. I knew that if she saw my mirth, her anger would escalate.
It didn't work.
"MOM, YOU ARE THE WORST MOTHER EVER ! DO YOU NOT HEAR THE DOORBELL?! DO YOU NOT HEAR THE TIMER?!
DO YOU NOT CARE IF I AM LATE FOR PRACTICE?!!!
You don't care about the dog, you don't care about the gas meter man, you don't care about anything but yourself!
I HATE YOU!!!"
Later that night, we snuggled under the covers of her bed, and talked quietly about how her best friend had hurt her in school that day.
This is my entry to @mariannewest's daily freewrite challenge for yesterday. The prompt was barking dog.
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I read the first part of this as if it were that song were 5oclock in the morning by Lily Allen and T-Pain :)
Hey, I get it though. I had a problem with spoons being too big for my mouth when I was a kid too!
lol !
O' boy. The girl seems to have a need for a psychiatrist or a boyfriend. :)
I don't think you have daughters. Am I right?
I do. She is a very thoughtful and giving person. So I am spoiled. )
This one ended up being a very thoughtful and giving person, but she had a rough patch for a few years. We all did really.
Teenage stage I presume?
13 to 16. Her dad died of ALS when she was 13. I cut her a lot of slack for a while.
I see. That is sad. That can trouble her on many different levels.
It is true that many times we are very busy with all the work in the house, we do things for everyone in the family, but it is also true that our efforts are not always, not to say never, recognized, even so we are always willing to help everyone in whatever they need.
Happy Saturday and greetings to your son