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RE: Chapter 16: The Phantom Nerve and a Promise in the Dark 第十六章：幽灵神经与暗夜誓言
You found the solution to make those loosing ends meet, although there's something missing, a few words extra words, 3-4, to refer to those earlier episodes and feelings/thoughts.
Pity of the eye, it was for sure thrilling what Chen did and the map she downloaded.
Knowing 'The Suit' is is better to be there within the next eight hours...still no food, nothing to drink or oil the joints.
I wonder if Chen's eyes give light in the dark or did he cut in the dark?
In advance I wish you, and above all your granddaughter, a happy celebration.
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Skip the desk for a day or two!
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Thank you so much for the detailed feedback and the brilliant literary catch! I will definitely fine-tune those transition words in the next chapter. And thank you a million for the warm wishes for the family celebration! (Just a small correction, it's my little grandson turning 3, but the celebration joy is absolute! 🥳) I am indeed taking a well-deserved break from the desk these couple of days to enjoy the family time. Cheers!
Grandson it is! Congratulations to him🍀❤️
Thank you so much for the sweet wishes, @wakeupkitty! 💖 I am packing my bags right now to head back home. I'll step away from the keyboard and fully enjoy this family time. See you and the community next week!
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Have an enjoyable time. Enjoy, moments like these are precious.
Be happy you still have some family.
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