This was a great weekend for you I must say. Doing volunteer work through the preaching work is really something to be commended. It saves lives. Hope grandpa is doing very well. Weekends are great for relaxation, so its good you watched a football match.

Note:

1. We have talked about how to use images correctly. Your thumbnail should be in landscape, but you used one in portrait. Please read and try to understand the guide below:

Image Content Etiquette: How to manage images correctly and make your posts look great.

1. This is a story of how you spent your day, but with no pictures to show some of your activities, its wrong. You visited your Grandpa, meaning you left the house. You could have taken pictures of your street or places you passed. Maybe picture of traffic, or a selfie with grandpa. 3 pictures would have been fine to make you story look real and sweet.

Hope you will improve your diary publication next time