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RE: SLC21/WK1: Empowering Life-Saving Skills: A Guide to First Response and Basic First Aid
Student Name: @artist1111
Time of checking: Within 24 hours of the homework
Overall Grade: [8/10]
Plagiarism Check: Pass
AI Use: No
| Question | What the Student Did Well | Areas for Improvement | Grading |
|---|---|---|---|
| Question 1 | Shared your memory about the emergency motorcycle accident scenario and demonstrated the application of learned first aid skills from a seminar. | Your description of the accident and the presentation of the scene were lacking in detail. For example, what was the response of the motorcyclists? Were they conscious? Was there any visible bleeding, and what was the outcome of the accident? Including these aspects would provide a clearer picture. Additionally, the main question focused on what actions you would have taken as a first responder in that moment and how it may have differed from what actually occurred. | [Grade: 0.9] |
| Question 2 | Effectively described the DRABC protocol application in a realistic road accident scenario, showing attention to detail and thoughtful planning. | While you did well explaining each step of the protocol, more detail on specific actions for checking the airway and positioning the motorcyclist’s head would be helpful. For example, describe the exact steps you would take to clear any airway obstructions if present. Adding more personal reflection on what aspects went well or could be improved would also enhance the response. Additionally, please avoid using unreferenced images, and only use free images to avoid copyright issues. | [Grade: 1.0] |
| Question 3 | Included relevant emergency contacts and provided a thorough overview of the services each contact number represents, making it a well-rounded and useful resource. | Excellent work providing emergency contacts; however, adding more services (e.g., natural disaster relief and a women’s helpline) would create a more comprehensive emergency resource list. | [Grade: 1.4] |
| Question 4 | Created an illustration of the DRABC protocol, showcasing creativity in visual presentation. The information was organized well, and you used design elements effectively to visualize each step. | While the illustration was a good effort, consider adding icons or labels to represent each step in the DRABC protocol more clearly. Using arrows or symbols to show that the DRABC protocol is a dynamic, step-by-step process would help viewers understand its progression and flow. | [Grade: 2.2] |
| Question 5 | Completed the quiz accurately, achieving a perfect score and demonstrating a strong grasp of the first aid concepts. | Excellent work here; no improvements needed as you have shown a clear understanding of the material. You scored 10 out of 10, reflecting your comprehensive grasp of the quiz material. | [Grade: 2.5] |
General Feedback:
Your report shows a solid understanding of first aid skills and the DRABC protocol, with a consistent level of effort across the different tasks. Enhancing descriptive detail and adding more visual and creative elements will improve your presentation and deepen your learning experience. Keep up the excellent performance in the quiz section, as it reflects well on your understanding of the material. Also, make sure to reference all visuals accurately and prioritize free-to-use images. Great work overall!
Thank you.
Regards,
@abdu.navi03
Thank you gentleman for your time.