I can see you enjoyed your day but then, this your post only focuses on the visit, no other event of the day was captured. No other images of different places not even your face to show how your real the post is.

There are better ways in writing a good dairy game post that captures the mind of your reader and also makes it interesting for them to read, if you don't mind, you can read it on my blog.

Then for your hashtags, you used s34guides but this your post wasn't a guild line post, it was a dairy game, so I think you shouldn't have used the hashtags s34guides.

Take notes of your dairy games pictures next time, it should not focus on one side, it should also draws people attention to your posts.

#s34improvement