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RE: SEC-S30W1: Anecdotes that teach: (While the Bridge was still Unfinished)
Hi, @ninapenda
It's a pleasure to see that you've accepted my challenge, welcome! Here is your evaluation:
Children aren't oblivious to what's happening around them; they simply live in the moment. Adults, on the other hand, make plans, always looking to the future, and that's why delays bother us.
A very well-told story, with a good moral that you could have defined better. Good job!
| Compliance with regulations | 3 |
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| Content | |
| Narrative coherence | 2 |
| Own Images | 2 |
| Message or moral | 1.5 |
| Presentation (markdown) | 1 |
| Total | 9.5 |