Hi, @lhorgic

It's a pleasure to see that you've accepted my challenge, welcome! Here is your evaluation:

It is unfortunate that a person of your complete trust has stolen your things, even though it does not seem like a big deal, it is a very strong situation, because as you say, trust is completely lost.

As for your post, you went on too long. There is a limit of 1000 words and you used 1231. I think it was unnecessary, since you could have used less than 700 words just to tell about your unpleasant experience. Sometimes these unnecessary twists and turns make the reader lose the sense of the plot.