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RE: SC-S29/W1- Nostalgia Of The Liitle Me : My favorite marble game

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Greetings,

Thank you so much for participating in the contest.

You have shared a beautiful description of your childhood gaming memories. Marble games are very familiar in our country, and I also played them during my childhood. However, in this age of smartphones, I sometimes wonder whether today’s children even recognize these traditional games.

While playing, many of us were scolded or even beaten during childhood, but those moments also feel sweet now. Without family guidance and discipline, we might have gone down the wrong path.

It’s good to hear that you were skilled at playing marbles. Becoming addicted to gambling was truly a lesson for you. What I appreciated most is that you realized its negative impact, warned others to stay away from it, and helped raise awareness.

SectionDescriptionPoints
Plagiarism & AI FreeOriginal storytelling from childhood2
Original PhotographyPersonal photos or recreated moments1.8
Markdown & PresentationNeat format, readable, visually appealing2
Memory DescriptionEmotions, details, and clarity of childhood1.7
Life Lesson / ValueReflection on what the memory taught you2
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The moments were really happy. Now I miss those childhood beating moments a lot.

You have given a wonderful review and a great rating of the post. Thank you very much for giving a valuable rating.