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RE: SC-S29/W1- Nostalgia Of The Liitle Me : Games we used to play ( Kanamachi game )

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You have beautifully presented the lost childhood game Kanamachi, which is a traditional game of Bangladesh. Through your writing, the rural environment, moments of playing with friends, and the joy of that time have come alive. Your effort to pass these childhood memories on to the new generation is truly commendable. But playing on the roof is dangerous.

You have explained very well how this game teaches trust, patience, cooperation, and human values. Kanamachi is not just a game, it is a symbol of tradition, bonding, laughter, and selfless joy, all of which are clearly reflected in your writing. Sadly, this beautiful game is now slowly fading away.

This is a heart-touching, nostalgia-filled, game. You have submitted a very nice entry.

SectionDescriptionPoints
Plagiarism & AI FreeOriginal storytelling from childhood2
Original PhotographyPersonal photos or recreated moments2
Markdown & PresentationNeat format, readable, visually appealing1.8
Memory DescriptionEmotions, details, and clarity of childhood2
Life Lesson / ValueReflection on what the memory taught you2
Total9.8 Points