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RE: SC-S29/W2- Nostalgia Of The Liitle Me : My School Days

in Story On Steem25 days ago

Greetings,

Thank you so much for participating in the contest.

I found the incident of going to an old abandoned house with friends quite unique and exceptional. Such adventures in school life give rise to a mixed feeling of fear and excitement in the mind of a child. This will be a real “nostalgic adventure” in your school life. There were some such buildings in our colony too which were scary to explore.

You have portrayed yourself as a student who is eager and happy to learn something new, which I found positive. Your skills in mathematics and helping friends reveal your confidence and cooperative attitude in this regard. It is good to hear that you enjoyed your student life.

Thank you for writing about the role of teachers in character building. You have not forgotten about your friends either, which proves how much you love your friends.

You have understood that skipping school and going to play Carrom Board is not right. I really liked how you have made it clear that responsibility and discipline are more valuable than temporary pleasures.

The memories of school life are so sweet that it is impossible to forget them and they have an impact on us, which is also the case with you.

SectionDescriptionPoints
Plagiarism & AI FreeOriginal storytelling from childhood2
Original PhotographyPersonal photos or recreated moments, photo caption1
Markdown & PresentationNeat format, readable, visually appealing1.5
Memory DescriptionEmotions, details, and clarity of childhood1.5
Life Lesson / ValueReflection on what the memory taught you1
Total7 Points